Redorigami's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Walk Around Cloud 9]

Decent

Really good concept and nice execution, with the exception of one minor detail. In the beginning all the awkward sudden stops in the nice legato notes into a quiet staccato bell part seem very out of place and ruin the mood of the piece. Having the last note slowly fade out would've given it a much smoother feel and kept with the theme.

bevermaly responds:

Thanks for your review, and I'll take that into consideration for future projects. :]

[Mood Zwing]

Great song

You've definitely got some talent here. Strong rhythms and catchy melodies make this a powerful song that's very fun to listen to. At some points I'd almost be willing to call this a DnB song. Very good, can't wait for more.

MfMusicFreak responds:

Thx alot! Theres just 1 thing I need help with, with things like the scrater and stuff like that, how do u put what u do on it into your song?

[Blue Army (TMO's Extended Mix)]

Umm...

Did you do anything to the original song besides speed up the original? Sure at the end there was an awkward transfer back to a more normal speed section and such, but it sounds like all you did was rearrange things (not very well I may add, the parts that sounded like you actually did something were very choppy) and speed it up. I was excited seeing the title Blue Army but seeing as you didn't do anything even slightly original nor did you do anything well, I was extremely disappointed.

DarkOnyx responds:

hehe, I've to make things clear here, I've cutted a long bit in the begining, I've put echo.reverb ecolizing,piched it up and speeded it up a bit, I've aslo cutted about four things in the middle and made a different ending , = this is the song I've "edited" more in, so I don't agree with u there

[Forelorn Lemons]

Decent

Pretty good, but I feel the piano needs more influence or a more ... unique feel ...
Nice drums though, makes up for the above point, even though drums aren't really my style.

nubbinownz responds:

believe me i wish i knew how to play piano

[//*Radiant Moon*\\]

Fun!

Fun piece that fits the name well and has fun bassline with a very soothing line that enters around :50, probably my favorite line in the whole piece.

Telliath responds:

Thanks for the review. :)